Notes from Exile: Atonement
Log/Verse: daily reflections from prison, written every morning at my bunk. Part poem, part log book.
Yesterday in Justice Notes, I wrote about atonement in the spirit of Rosh Hashanah—a season of repentance and reflection. Today, for Log/Verse, I want to share lines from David Whyte’s poem COLEMAN’S BED.
Whyte reminds us that renewal isn’t about erasing the past, but about weathering its weight and shaping ourselves into the person we most want to be—the self we’d like to present to the world before we leave it.
It’s a reminder I carry with me as I move forward, pebble by pebble, into this next season of renewal.
AN EXCERPT FROM COLEMAN’S BED BY DAVID WHYTE
See with every turning day,
how each season makes a child
of you again, wants you to become
a seeker after rainfall and birdsong,
watch now, how it weathers you
to a testing in the tried and true,
admonishes you with each falling leaf,
to be courageous, to be something
that has come through, to be the last thing
you want to see before you leave the world.
You can read the entire poem here, COLEMAN'S BED. Coleman was an Irish saint who lived in a cave beneath a chapel overlooking the Irish Sea in the West of Ireland. This holy site inspired David Whyte’s poem and reflects on themes of self-compassion and welcoming one’s own outcast parts, drawing a parallel between the saint’s humble life and personal spiritual growth.


I love your piece incorporating the message of Rosh Hashanah—so beautifully reflective and honest. The piece with David Whyte’s poem, Coleman’s Bed, encapsulates our journey as we age and await Godot. Thanks for sharing your insightful, personal reflections. You deserve accolades for your pieces!
Powerful words…